Responses to my site
I thought it was really interesting the way you delivered just the right amount of information, but the grammer and wording in your summary could use some work. Besides that, I think you could put a little more writtin information. It is a good site though.
-Alex Vue
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I really liked the biography and pictures on your site. However, I think you should add more information into why he liked science so much and why he chose to do what he wanted to do.
- Andrea
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Your site kept me interested with the colors and the pictures. You had good information, I just would've liked to see more of it. I did noticed some grammatical errors in you biography paragraphs, though which is something you should look at.
-Jasmin Cruz
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Your information was correct and it was put togetther well. Though I agree Jasmin, you do have some gramatical errors. But, those errors do not take away from the infromation.
-Tyler Glazewski
www.thejobsbiography.weebly.com
:) I really liked reading your site! It had a lot of information that I didn't know about him before. Although, your grammer/wording might need a little work, but other than that I think it's cool.
-Amber McGuire
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I liked your website. I did not know ANYTHING about Albert Einstein and now I do. Great website
-Soraya
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